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take me


take me away with you
dont leave me in here
take me somewhere new
any where but not here

take me to a place where i can sit for hours just to look at your face
to talk and dance and act so stupid ...
i like even when we go insain ..

take me to a place where i can sit under the blue sky
late at night with you ...
lay on the golden sands and hold your hand so tight
i know it will feel so right ..as long as i am around you

i like to count the stars with you
i like to collect the sands with you
i like to fly away with you
coz i know every impossible dream can come true when i share it with you

take me to a place where there is no one else around
take me to an old empty town
where there is no noise & no sound
just your sound ..and just you around
im satisfied ,,,heart and mind
coz i need no one else
its just you who i wanna be with
and there is no one else
can make me feel this way

take me with you where its just you and me
make all my childhood dreams true ..
i believe you can ..because all my life is on ur hands
so plan it as you want to

take me to a cave or to a mountain
i dont really care as long as im with you
take me to a desert or to a forest
i dont really care as long as im around you

or take me in your arms
and leave me to get lost in your charm
my place is your eyes i know ....
thats where i belong .....

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